

Book Review: For A Few Demons More
Dylan Madeley
This book provided me with two vastly different experiences. The first eighty pages felt like they introduced a bevy of Mary Sues and seemingly one-dimensional characters, dragged in loose ends presumably left from previous novels in the series, and provided plenty of grammatical distractions for those erudite readers who think Shed had cut [her hair] a couple of months ago... doesnt look right. The next three-hundred-seventy-six pages are, somehow, noticeably better. They are accessible, colloquial, sometimes whimsical and fun, occasionally stark, and a decent read overall.
The story revolves around Rachel Morgan, a witch, who in a previous book acquired a cursed artifact of great power. Several previously established plots are injected to complicate things; whenever Rachel thinks she has figured out how to negotiate between the many factions of the Hollows and another realm called the Ever After vampires, werewolves, demons, elves, ordinary humans to protect herself, her friends and lovers, and the status quo, you can guess that something will ruin her plan. She seems less irritating and more human by the chapter, as do many supporting characters, as she reacts to her experiences in decent emotional narrative.
The grammar issue fades over the span of the book as the peculiarities are consistent enough to be considered a colloquial voice, if not a unique one.
Author Kim Harrison also plays with the psychology of other beings. For example, vampires are not simply humans that enjoy drinking blood from time to time to be stronger and live longer, nor are werewolves simply humans that change to ferocious monsters at every full moon; vampires and werewolves have personalities that reflect the social reality of their respective conditions. Werewolves have a pack mentality, and often seem to search for the approval of strong leaders and groups to feel secure. Vampires and their human associates, as I suspected would be the case, have deep sexual issues about biting, being bitten, and the anticipation of both. This is demonstrated in an obligatory vampire-involved sex scene that amuses more than it arouses, but did not put me off the rest of the book once I was that far along.
What did threaten to put me off the book, in the early portions, was Jenks, Rachels garden-dwelling pixy friend. He zips around on dragonfly wings, spouting bad one-liners and would make me want to keep a flyswatter handy in his presence even if he is supposed to be too fast to hit and nearing the end of a natural eighteen-year life span. Fortunately, even the most off-putting character of the bunch sees development and becomes sort of likeable; the reader sees the gravity of his short life span, his fierce loyalty to Rachel and friends who help protect his garden, and his usefulness as a scout and bodyguard.
Admittedly, I jumped into Harrisons strange world without reading any previous books in the series, and that complicates things. What to me resembled eighty pages of hasty plot and character introduction were likely intended as a reintroduction for series followers; characters already given meaning in previous books. However, strong sequels should stand on their own to a reasonable extent, and eighty pages are how many it took for me to acclimatize; when Harrison was no longer introducing me to previously established characters and plotlines with such frequency, and spent time developing these elements, I enjoyed the story.
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